By Ben Smith
When we talk about poetry, what sorts of techniques do we consider? Rhyme scheme? Sure, sometimes. Form? Absolutely. Prosody? Without question. And, of course, one of the most important ones: rhythm. Poetry, being the most musical form of writing, is all about rhythm. It’s all about the beat of the words: how they feel, how they sound in conjunction with one another.
Now what about prose? What do we talk about there? Character, plot, POV, dialogue; maybe if we’re looking closely we’ll talk about strong verb choices, sentence variation—but how many people really care about the music of it? So here’s the question I want to ask of all the prose-writers out there, all the memoirists, the novelists: What about the language?
Tom Robbins, the master of uber-rhythmic prose, writes in his 2014 memoir that “people read with their ears as well as their eyes,” and this, for me, at least, rings resoundingly true. Of course, in fiction, our primary obligation must be to the character, but if we forget about the language, we become dull, we become unimportant. There’s a difference, after all, between prose that says something significant, and prose that sings it.
So what exactly does rhythm do for a piece, other than making it exciting? Well, first and foremost it allows us to control the tone of the piece. For example, let’s look at this sentence from the opening pages of Salman Rushdie’s 1988 novel The Satanic Verses:
Gibreel, the tuneless soloist, had been cavorting in moonlight as he sang his impromptu gazal, swimming in air, butterfly-stroke, breast-stroke, bunching himself into a ball, spreadeagling himself against the almost-infinity of the almost-dawn, adopting heraldic postures, rampant, couchant, pitting levity against gravity.
This is a pretty long sentence—about five lines in my copy—and it’s absolutely ecstatic. From the absolute breathlessness of the sentence’s rhythm we learn that this narrator, in spite of the substantial event that precedes this passage (a terrorist attack on an airplane mid-flight), is thrilled about the circumstances. Sure, the diction has something to do with it, but mostly it’s about the way the words fit together. The characters, in falling, feel weightless, and because of the way the writer controls his language, we are made to feel the same way. Of course, not all of those words need to be there. Not for clarity of narration. Some of the actions described in that sentence are there for the purposes of rhythm, because the author wants us to feel his narrator’s elation.
The second thing rhythm does is control pacing. In writing something fast-moving (a thriller, for example), you might use short, terse lines, in order to get all the necessary information on the page while shuffling the reader through the story in a (hopefully) electrifying fashion. More introspective stories might require involved or languid sentences. And both of these go back to tone: suspense and tension come with choppy sentences—or choppy clauses (substituting different sorts of punctuation for periods can often create a more rushed feeling; Colum McCann’s 2009 novel Let the Great World Spin, for example, contains a page-long sentence describing a car crash, in which a comma separates each independent clause). Leisurely sentences, though, or ones with more complex constructions, let the reader really consider what’s happening. In other words, the way you build sentences does a lot to control how your reader feels about what he or she is reading.
There’s quite a bit more to say about rhythm (fragments are good for you! never construct any sentence like the one that came before it!), but here are the bare bones of the subject. In short, it’s important. All of us, whether poets or prose-writers, would do well to put an equal amount of thought and effort into both the content and the style of our writing, because therein lies the difference between good writers and great ones: great writers have mastered the rhythm of their sentences. Good writers say, great ones sing.
Please join Mosaic Art and Literary Journal in collaboration with Audeamus Honors Journal for an open mic night of poetry and prose at Back to the Grind in downtown Riverside. Meet the editors of UCR’s two undergraduate journals, experience a local space that celebrates artists, and maybe even read some of your own pieces.
Sign-ups for the open mic will begin at 6pm. Bring your own work to read or explore past issues of either Journal.
Welcome to Mosaic 55!
Mosaic Art & Literary Journal is excited to open up another year of good reads and great work.
Since 1959, Mosaic Art & Literary Journal has showcased the work of dedicated writers and artists. What started out as a casual poetry group has since become one of the West Coast’s oldest literary journals. We like to think that part of that is due to our commitment to quality, creativity, and outreach – and because we’ve been in the hands of passionate editors.
Mosaic is a fantastic lit mag in its own merit: from the custom water-color covers of 1982, to the multimedia edition of 2008, to 1993’s nuts-and-bolts binding, we’ve sought to bring good work together under creative “roofs.” In fact, each edition is so unique that we’ll bring a selection with us to open mics for the audience to peruse. Often at our readings, local authors will find their pieces in our older editions. We get excited when we realize that we’ve been part of their creative development!
But there’s another reason that Mosaic is such a meaningful publication – one that we hope many people will get to experience first-hand. Mosaic acts as a catalyst for vital relationships between editors, contributors, and the community. Let’s talk about that.
Housed at the University of California, Riverside, Mosaic provides students with meaningful literary experiences. Our editors are passionate about good art. They come from a variety of backgrounds, and, well, may have a greater craving for Oreos than your run-of-the-mill editorial team, but their commitment to finding and publishing quality pieces is unconditional. Many of our editors are interested in pursuing careers in writing, visual art, and publishing, so Mosaic’s publication process is valuable to the way we build our knowledge base.
Our editorial board is on the lookout for compelling, well-crafted pieces – from contributors like you! Whether your niche is travel essays, mythology-inspired photography, or detail-driven short stories, we want to find the best creative work and show it to the rest of the world. Our contributors have come from as close as UC Riverside faculty to as far as China. We’re serious about publishing polished, engaging pieces – so get drafting!
At its heart, Mosaic is about community. One of the ways we demonstrate that is by cultivating involvement in the Riverside arts scene. Thanks to our partnership with the Gluck Fellows Program of the Arts at UC Riverside, we’ve been able to connect with the city in unique ways. Our goal is to build creative spaces for budding and seasoned writers alike. We’ve done readings at local bookstores, at bars, at coffee shops, with other great lit mags like The Inlandia Institute, and we’ve even hosted an art print workshop at the Riverside Art Museum. If you’re ever in our neck of the woods, check our Facebook page for events and updates!
We’ve got some great changes coming this year – contests, articles, events, and more. Be prepared to see more of us online – and we want to see more of you! Like us on Facebook, send us your creative work, and drop in at a reading (or five). We’d love to chat. And on that note –
Submissions are Open!
Send us your fiction, narrative nonfiction, poetry, plays, visual art, and photography! Submissions will close on January 31st, 2016. Make sure to review our submission guidelines for details.
We hope you’ll join us this year as we celebrate 55 years of writing, reading, and wonderful art. Happy submitting!
Hello, readers and writers! We’ve come to that time in our school year again!
Mosaic is looking for new UCR undergraduate Mosaic editors!
Before we get into the details, here’s a little bit abut us: We’ve been publishing artwork and writing from students and writers all around the world for over 50 years, and we’ve been able to touch the creative pulse of the Riverside community through our partnership with the Gluck Fellows Program of the Arts. We’re looking forward to another wonderful year – and we want your expertise!
We are currently looking for UCR undergraduates of any major who are interested in becoming fiction/nonfiction, poetry, and art editors. Editors on our staff will be reading, selecting pieces, and editing this year’s issue. Any student interested in learning more about becoming an editor can attend one of our orientation dates:
Monday, May 11th, HUB 268 from 2:30pm-3:30pm
Wednesday, May 13th, HUB 260 from 2:00pm-3:00pm
Friday, May 15th, HUB 268 from 2:30pm-3:30pm
If you’d rather submit your application earlier, a direct link to our application titled “UCR Editor Application” can be found on the second most right hand widget. Just click the link and fill us in! Applications will be open from now until Friday, May 22nd at 11:59pm.
Thank you for your interest, and good luck to you all!
Hello, writers and readers!
To celebrate the beautiful month of February, we have TWO open mic nights for prose and poetry alike!
Join us at our readings, ride upon the magic of our IE and OC poets, and enjoy our NEW EXTENDED deadline of February 28th, 2015.
Thursday, February 5th:
Open Mic at Getaway Café from 7:30pm-9:30pm! Sign-ups begin at 7:00pm.
Thursday, February 12th:
Poetry Reading and Open Mic featuring the OC’s very own Ellen Webre! Reading spans from 7:30pm-9:30pm. Sign-ups start at 7:00pm.
Hope to see you all there!
Hello, writers and readers!
To usher in the new year, we have a open mic reading at Cellar Book Doors in Riverside on Wednesday, January 7th from 6:30pm to 8:00pm! Sign-ups start at 6:00pm. We will also have previous issues of Mosaic available to all who wish to read them, whether personally or to the audience!
Additionally, we have a special announcement reserved for that night, so if you wanna be the first in on it, join us for a night of prose and poetry at the coziest little bookstore in Riverside!